Friday, October 11, 2019
Language Analysis the Power of Ink Essay
Helen Day is a part-time journalist and blogger. She maintains her blog entitled Street beat on a variety of current social issues. This blog entry, The Power of Ink, is about tattoos and it has drawn a variety of responses from readers of her blog. In recent years, the practice of ââ¬Ëinkingââ¬â¢ your body, or having tattoos indelibly imprinted on your skin has become almost ââ¬Ëde rigueurââ¬â¢ for many in our society, especially the young. There is a wide variety of views about this practice and Helen Day, a regular blogger, has her say in her entry ââ¬ËThe Power of Inkââ¬â¢. Rather than lecturing her substantial audience of followers, Day chooses simply to trace the stages of the history of tattoos, focusing on the changes in their meaning and significance. Her use of examples and language with negative connotations is effective in arguing that people who choose to ââ¬Ëadornââ¬â¢ themselves with tattoos are just as much victims or prisoners as those for whom they were originally intended. Her blog attracted four extremely varied responses within the next twenty four hours, showing that this is indeed a contentious issue. Helen Day begins by establishing the ubiquitous nature of tattoos. In a light-hear ted, humorous fashion, she mentions that people from all walks of life, including ââ¬Ësuburban housewivesââ¬â¢, ââ¬Ënewsreaders and sitcom starsââ¬â¢ have words and pictures ââ¬Ëdraw[n]ââ¬â¢ on their skin. Even at this early stage, she mentions ââ¬Ëprisonââ¬â¢ and readers may feel uncomfortable with this reference, which is just what the writer intends. She clearly states her contention that ââ¬Ëthe power of ink has diminishedââ¬â¢. Day begins her argument by clearly establishing the original purpose of tattooing, using examples from ââ¬Ëmillenniaââ¬â¢ as support. She mentions the origins of the practice where the ââ¬Ëunconsenting backs of prisoners and slavesââ¬â¢ were marked to show that they were owned, ââ¬Ëdeviantââ¬â¢ or ââ¬Ëincarceratedââ¬â¢. She goes further to remind readers of the literal and metaphorical ââ¬Ëindelible crueltyââ¬â¢ of the tattoos forced upon inmates of the Nazi concentration camps during World War 11. Her words are carefully chosen at this stage of her argument to create a feeling of unease and repulsion in her audience at the idea that tattoos representedà ââ¬Ëownershipââ¬â¢ or ââ¬Ëcontrolââ¬â¢ and that those on whom they were imposed were considered to be ââ¬Ësomewhere between property and machineââ¬â¢. By associating tattoos with lack of free will or self-determination, she predisposes her readers to think negatively of the practice of tattooing, even before she considers what it represents in contemporary society. Day goes on to provide an illustration of how those forced to wear tattoos resented this imposition and how they showed their refusal to be controlled, satirising their ââ¬Ëownersââ¬â¢ by adopting their own version of an ownerââ¬â¢s mark. She connects this act of ââ¬Ëdefianceââ¬â¢ to the motivation behind her decision to demonstrate her ââ¬Ëfeministââ¬â¢ principles in the 1990s, wryly remarking that her attempt to protest and be unique fell flat because now ââ¬Ëevenââ¬â¢ the British Prime Ministerââ¬â¢s wife has an ankle tattoo. The language the writer uses here is quite mocking of her young self. She separates herself from the young Helen, representing her actions as clichà © and immature, in an attempt to position her readers to view it i n the same way. The comment from young ââ¬ËTashââ¬â¢ (written late at night) is a perfect example of such (some might say misguided) youthful impulsiveness. Readers can hear the excitement in ââ¬ËTashââ¬â¢sââ¬â¢ ââ¬Ëvoiceââ¬â¢ as she describes how she ââ¬Ëdesigned [her] own ankle braceletââ¬â¢ and how she likes to ââ¬Ëshow it offââ¬â¢. The use of language such as ââ¬Ëlikeââ¬â¢ and ââ¬Ëyeahââ¬â¢, suggests that she is very young and may one day regret her decision just as Helen Day does. The comment from ââ¬ËCleanskinââ¬â¢ also echoes Dayââ¬â¢s point that tattoos ââ¬Ëfadeââ¬â¢ and ââ¬Ëstretchââ¬â¢ over time and may not suit an older person. These responses underline the writerââ¬â¢s message of ââ¬Ëact in haste, repent at leisureââ¬â¢ and young readers may cringe when reading ââ¬ËTashââ¬â¢sââ¬â¢ enthusiastic comment. Day concludes her blog entry by redefining the social meaning of tattoos in todayââ¬â¢s society. She describes them as having been ââ¬Ëcommodifiedââ¬â¢, that is, just something else to be bought and sold and with no real significance. She use s the expression ââ¬Ëtry hardââ¬â¢, suggesting that people who have tattoos are doing so to create a false image of themselves in order to find acceptance. Readers would certainly not like to be included in this category. By describing tattoos as ââ¬Ëfashionââ¬â¢s proprietary markââ¬â¢, she is claiming that those who decide to tattoo themselves are just as much slaves and prisoners as the original bearers of these marks, it is just that their owner is now ââ¬Ëfashionââ¬â¢. In suggesting that tattoo wearers are still under the control of an outside force, thatà fashion trends are dictating their actions, she hopes that readers will review their attitude to the practice. The contrast between the two accompanying images starkly demonstrates the writerââ¬â¢s argument that the meaning of tattoos has changed. The Ta Moko on the arms of the three Maori men clearly mark them as members of the same clan. The three tattoos are identical to each other, suggesting that the design is traditional and has a particular significance for the wearers. ââ¬ËKiwiââ¬â¢sââ¬â¢ indignant description of non-Maoris imitating the ââ¬Ësacredââ¬â¢ Ta Moko as ââ¬Ëidentity theftââ¬â¢ would act as a strong disincentive to readers to undertake such a ââ¬Ëdisgraceful and immoralââ¬â¢ action. The other shoulder tattoo of a star, shown on the front cover of Sam de Britoââ¬â¢s 2006 book, might well have been designed by the wearer, but it has none of the c ultural ââ¬Ëweightââ¬â¢ of the Ta Moko designs. The images reinforce the idea that it may be fashion that is dictating the current trend to tattoo oneââ¬â¢s skin. This blog is certainly cause for thought. Although Helen Day sets out to argue that ââ¬Ëthe power of ink has diminishedââ¬â¢, she actually argues against this. In establishing the contention that tattoos are still just as powerful a message about ownership, but that the ââ¬Ëownerââ¬â¢ has changed from government and slave owner to the tyrant of fashion, she prompts her online audience to rethink whether in deciding to ââ¬Ëinkââ¬â¢ themselves they are actually being a ââ¬Ëuniqueââ¬â¢ rebellious individual or just another fashion victim.
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